As a queer writer myself, I've been there. I know what it's like to send your script out, only for the feedback to focus on the queerness of the characters, at the expense of any constructive help.
You too have probably, at some point, felt nervous sending your script to someone who may not understand your work because they don't identify as lgbtq+. Which leads to you fighting for your story in ways you didn't think you'd have to.
Finding a reader to give script notes, where the subtleties of an lgbtq+ life isn't lost on them, isn't easy. Having to convince readers that what the community DOES NOT actually need, is yet another traumatic coming out story, can be exhausting
You've come to the right place. I pride myself on vibing with writers and their stories, so you can rest assured you've got someone that's in YOUR corner.
So, dear lgbtq+ sibling, I got you. I understand that, as queer writers, we often (but not always) want our stories, themes, characters and messages to give insight into life on the lgbtq+ spectrum, but not be focussed on them. I am well versed in pretty much everything lgbtq+, and have a very gay open mind to anything I don't.
So you can rest assured I will give you the script notes you need to help your queer story shine.
At least 3 pages of feedback covering:
Opening scenes
Character
Dialogue
Action
Structure (which includes pace, plot and general craft notes)
At least 3 pages of feedback covering:
Opening scenes
Character
Dialogue
Action
Structure (which includes pace, plot and general craft notes)
At least 3 pages of feedback covering:
Opening scenes
Character
Action
Structure (which includes pace, plot and general craft notes)
At least 5 pages of feedback covering:
Opening scenes
Character
Dialogue
Action
Structure (which includes pace, plot and general craft notes)
At least 5 pages of feedback covering:
Opening scenes
Character
Dialogue
Action
Structure (which includes pace, plot and general craft notes)
At least 5 pages of feedback covering:
Opening scenes
Character
Dialogue
Action
Structure (which includes pace, plot and general craft notes)